I, You & the Cosmic I
A Personal Voyage
As I offer You a flower, Ma,
I come to You as the very flower!
As I smell and savor the beguiling scent,
I become the scent, the flower & the space between!
As I collect the flower from her kindly mother flora,
I become the plant, its leaves & the spreading roots!
As I enter the garden to gather these winsome blooms,
I become the garden, the air and the nourishing soil!
As I breathe the air in there and revel in the breeze,
I become the breeze, the earth and the firmament!
As I gaze the canopy embedded with many immaculate pearls,
I become the Sun, the Moon and the twinkling stars!
As I gape at the sprawling bright ‘Akash Ganga’,
I become the glow spreading as the ‘Sathasaakhi’, the ‘Aswath’!
As I muse on the celestial gems, the seen and the unseen,
I become the thoughts that form this very universe!
When I am the cosmos, then I am the time, the absolute,
Flowing, spreading, filling, engulfing every void and beyond!
Through the time, the incessant time, I become YOU, the Cosmic I,
As all the aphorisms emanating from the Vedas start blooming in me!
This was originaly presented in Sulekha.com on August 18 2008

written by rudra, 2010-02-06 04:09:43
A truly Advaitic experience, expressed in such beautiful poetic format.
...I become the scent, the flower & the space between!....
Indeed...is there any difference between the experiencer, experiencee and the experience?
Welcome back...I emphatically echo Partha's and NS' greetings.
Best,
Dwai
written by partha, 2010-02-06 01:56:21
You should really not have troubled yourself so much.
I think I am able to understand what you call 'lack of total involvement', now that I know that you do not know the Tamil language.
A reviewer of my book would have certainly liked to go back to the original Tamil version at least occasionally. That must have been your problem.
Our membership in tmj perhaps does not include too many Tamil knowing persons. Therefore the lack of a review in tmj for the book perhaps does not matter.
Please feel free to drop the idea of writing the review.
If you have enjoyed reading any part of it, do let me know at your leisure. By the way did you get to read my 6-part blog on Parashurama Kshetra? Did you like it?
Warm regards. Partha.
written by narensomu, 2010-02-02 20:42:57
" Kakkai Siraginile Nandalala" -As Partha says one is reminded of these immortal lines while reading your beautiful lines.
Warm regards
ns
written by partha, 2010-01-31 17:08:23
Wonder whether you have read the pre-independence national poet Subrahmanya Bharati in translation. One of his invocations to Nandalala has these striking lines,
'In the feathers of the crow, Nandalala, I see your shyamavarna........... When I put my fingers into this flame, I feel that I am touching you.... and so on!'
You put me in mind of my favourite modern Tamil poet! Thanks once again.
Warm regards. Partha.
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That was very nice of you. I appreciate the gesture.
I have started reading Parashurama Kshetra. I like the approach. I shall complete and come back again.
Thanks
Kartha